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The Accident In Eid Night

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When I was a kid I liked to play football. Now I’m worried to play.

So continuing…

When I was in Kindergarten, I played football a lot. But when it was Eid night, I was playing football in the house.

And suddenly!!!! I slipped. I hit my head on the wall. I dropped down and entered the garbage. It was a bloody mess. I almost drowned in my own BLOOD!!!!!!!

So I hope you learned from my lesson…….DON’T PLAY FOOTBALL IN HOUSES.

 

-TEZgaming 

Author: TEZgaming

Im a You tuber,Gamer,Singer I will Support My Family On Any Thing.

2 Comments

  1. Nawaf,
    Great job of telling this story. My head hurt when I read the part about hitting your head on the wall. Your hyperbole about almost drowning in your own blood was powerful too.

    I like the picture of Kermit you found on Pixabay. Good job. You are a good role model of responsible blogging.

    Love,
    Mrs. Denise

    P.S. I hope it is OK, but I took out a few of your extra capital letters. It makes it a little easier on your readers’ eyes to capitalize only at the beginning of a sentence and proper nouns.

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