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Constructing, creating, communicating, collaborating, and thinking critically in grade 5.

LONELY

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The summary of a story I wrote:

A rich family lived a bad life with a bad husband. A day the mom asked for her children. “What?!!” They are gone.

How? Why? When the mother went to look out for them it was a snowy, cold¬†weather. She found her child, but not a place to live. When they were walking she found a wise house, so they went there. When they were finish telling the story of their life, the wise person said, “Go back, go back. You’re now safe. Everything is done now.”

When the family went back to home, they found the husband died and A PARTY IS GOING ON THERE!!!!!WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! They were screaming.

Everything is good now.

IS IT A GOOD STORY  ??

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